WALT write a timed recount about a time
when we did something special with our whanau or family.
Write about:
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when and where you did something special
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who was with you
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what you did (think about the order you did things)
·
how you felt and why you felt this way.
by Jacob Christie
Once I went to a
great Kea camp with dad. That night my friends and I had a pillow fight. It was
huge. We stayed up all night. In the morning I was exhausted because I stayed
up all night. The people from our class was Harry and William. We heard people
talking. I felt really happy because I had heaps of friends there.
Next
steps
Add extra detail with some describing words
to make that picture in the mind of the reader.
e.g. Where was the Kea camp? What did it
look like? Were you in tents or cabins?